All Comments on 'The Kings New Bride'

by Ceilo

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dreamcatcher7dreamcatcher7about 17 years ago
brilliant

loved it and what a wonderful twist at the end, brilliant

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Poms can spell and have a sense of humour!

I thought you left it a little too long to introduce the magic wand. It would have shortened the story but the punch would have been even more effective.

Regardless,whilst everybody (?) knew what was coming you still climaxed at the right moment!

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