All Comments on 'The Lady and The Lad'

Interesting set-up, but was there a story in there?

-- KVK

I think you captured perfectly the Mistress/slave dynamic. When you write more, I'll happily read it.

too much telling not enough showing -- not dramatic enough

You have caught the right tone...now explore the mentality in follow up stories.

Total bliss with an older woman. What a turn on.

If you like sado-masochism this is your dish of offal.

For the read.