by spiritseeker561
Next time dump the "*" around words looks like some 5 year old writing the story.
and I hope you will write more. It had a marvellous piquancy. Thank you.
It's a good story get over the *****************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************Had enough*****************************************************************************************
...because I thought it was an excellent tale. The ending's left as open as Susan's legs, so take it you have a follow-up in mind?