All Comments on 'The Lamp Ch. 01-02'

by carvohi

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DanielQSteele1DanielQSteele1almost 14 years ago
WISH FULFILLMENT, BUT NOT BAD

This was cute and funny. One vote for a continuation.

jasonnhjasonnhalmost 14 years ago
Goofy

But a fun read. I like the mix of magically forcing her to do some things and her doing some things on her own because she is coerced into it. The genie is funny.

nomoretears00nomoretears00almost 14 years ago
Funny!

It's kind of kooky, but I liked it! I'd like to see more.

bitofkinkbitofkinkalmost 14 years ago
funny

it was funny and a bit goofy in places. a few spelling mistakes. I say keep going :) it'll be interesting to see what you do next.

MissElf1MissElf1over 13 years ago
The punisher

You do like punishing women. Perhaps she will learn to appreciate him.

Iamcurious999Iamcurious999over 6 years ago
Miracles Can Happen...!

This story is MARVELOUS! It is so wonderful to see a horrid modern woman transformed into a loving and considerate wife, even if it takes a little magic to do this.

A Five-star story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
this is a carvohi story?

but the man isnt a spineless insipid shit

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Quirky and fun

I'd read more.

jimjam69jimjam69about 4 years ago
Pretty good

At least I need to see where this goes.

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