by Landrious1
Great story--- Great twist---
Please, Please, Please continue SOON TOOOOOO long between chapters.
I simply had to re-read ch. 1-6 to get up to speed on ch. 7. It was not a boring read. Even though it was a second tour you held my interest. Ch. 7 was not disappointing it completed the story and made the whole experience a pleasant trip into love and romance long denied. Thank You. Ronnie W.
loved the surprise and the fun and the emotion.
loved the bit about his grandmother.
loved the bit about his professional sucess.
Landrious i couldnt stop crying when Grams came on the video my moms mom died and i was at her burial but she never had a video but i loved this story you write so beautiful i hope you continue writing the same kind of stories like this .
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga.
Keep writing those great stories Landrious1
you will always be my favorite writer so keep up the good work
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga
I still think your the best Landrious1 I really hope you keep writing about Beth and Josh and Alex there the tops in your story i wish i was with them and living the life of Alex Palmer keep up the Great work.
Pat Murray
I spent it cleaning out the hog barn. I figured I had just dumped a big pile of shit off at the court house so I might as well take care of the rest of it.
The hatred that his parents & siblings have for him is over the top of what's already an unbelievable story.
I can't stop reading this series. Absolutely wonderful writing.
Poorly structured, incoherent sequencing, overdramatic and repetetive sex scenes. Overall, a terrible effort. Dont write any more.
Screw um... Keep um coming... They no like, they can go to Barnes and Noble.. 😉😜😉👍