All Comments on 'The Last 24 Hours Ch. 07'

by Landrious1

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NamizujsNamizujsover 18 years ago
The surprise was great

Thank you, it was worth the wait!

Please continue

John

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Awesom----Very powerful

Great story--- Great twist---

Please, Please, Please continue SOON TOOOOOO long between chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Had a lovely re-read

I simply had to re-read ch. 1-6 to get up to speed on ch. 7. It was not a boring read. Even though it was a second tour you held my interest. Ch. 7 was not disappointing it completed the story and made the whole experience a pleasant trip into love and romance long denied. Thank You. Ronnie W.

amartsamartsover 17 years ago
excelleant

loved the surprise and the fun and the emotion.

loved the bit about his grandmother.

loved the bit about his professional sucess.

bornagainbornagainover 17 years ago
So Beautiful and breath taking

Landrious i couldnt stop crying when Grams came on the video my moms mom died and i was at her burial but she never had a video but i loved this story you write so beautiful i hope you continue writing the same kind of stories like this .

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga.

bornagainbornagainover 17 years ago
A Great story

Keep writing those great stories Landrious1

you will always be my favorite writer so keep up the good work

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga

bornagainbornagainover 17 years ago
your still the best

I still think your the best Landrious1 I really hope you keep writing about Beth and Josh and Alex there the tops in your story i wish i was with them and living the life of Alex Palmer keep up the Great work.

Pat Murray

cliffhanger20cliffhanger20over 11 years ago
THE WEEKEND AFTER MY LAST DIVORCE

I spent it cleaning out the hog barn. I figured I had just dumped a big pile of shit off at the court house so I might as well take care of the rest of it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Too much

The hatred that his parents & siblings have for him is over the top of what's already an unbelievable story.

linnearlinnearover 4 years ago
Totally Captivating

I can't stop reading this series. Absolutely wonderful writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Poorly structured, incoherent sequencing, overdramatic and repetetive sex scenes. Overall, a terrible effort. Dont write any more.

OldmantruckerOldmantrucker11 months ago

Screw um... Keep um coming... They no like, they can go to Barnes and Noble.. 😉😜😉👍

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