All Comments on 'The Launderette'

always makes me hot. Thanks for sharing this!

May need another edit, but it was a fun little story. Good luck in the contest.

Rumple Foreskin

GOOD STORY NOT ENOUGH SEX

Oh come on!!! Yeah it wasn't bad but it looks like it's been written by a horny 14 year old. Where's the passion? The grunting, the intricate descriptions...

It sucks

Ever hear the phrase of opportunity knocking? A lovely blonde goes after our hero? Adam and they enjoy a good bout of sex on Valentine's day, then he lets her go? It just seems so hollow. Take a chance, with a little tension and some creativity you could have made that something for real romance.

very original write,

often had those mental movies of the

laundry mats when my step father was alive

he had over 80 laundry mats and the stories

I could tell you <grin>

great story

good luck and happy lovers day

A fun read, short and quick. Anyway I love quickies. Good luck!

I would love to go to the laundry and read this story there. Good story!

Good story, and hot.