by texaswade
Very well written and realistic
I particularly liked the internal dialogue and the relationship ties you included---made the characters more realistic and likeable.
Great story... I hope the girlfriends somehow some way got too watch....
need to find the original chapter 15 (last chapter)
Really enjoyed your Lawn Rangers story... I am older, curious and found this story to be very believable and well written. Thank you for writing such erotic stories !!
JT / Marshall Texas