All Comments on 'The Layby'

For some reason, I didn't see the second driver getting in on it so it wound up a nice twist. Nice work!

The story itself is good, however, you should get an editor. There are a number of mistakes, one of which is that you switch from third person to first person a number of times. There are number of editors that will screen and make recommended corrections at no cost to you. They are listed through a link on the opening page to this site.

Don't give up, as the story is good, and I am sure that you have more that many of us would like to read.

Thanks

A bit confusing but the sex was hot. My fantasy is for my wife wife, Marianne, to give herself over to several men for them to use every one of her tight holes over and over!

NICE HOT STORY. HAPPY TO NOTE YOU ENJOYED BOTH MEN'S BIG DICKS. CAN'T WAIT FOR A SEQUEL AND HOPE THIS TIME YOUR HUSBAND WILL WATCH YOU GET THE FUCK OF YOUR LIFE BY BOTH MEN SIMULTANEOUSLY. I AM SURE HE WILL ENJOY IT AS MUCH AS MY HUSBAND DOES EACH TIME HE WATCHED ME BEING FUCKED BY OTHER MEN AND GETTING MULTIPLES ORGASMS.

Where's the Love. What a perverted sickness - to allow some other male to force your wife that way. Gives new meaning to the term sub-human.