All Comments on 'The Lessons Ch. 18'

by Charles Petersunn

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Great but creepy

You write well, of course. But... Do you *really* have to put her on the set of a little girl's room? If innocent is a turn on, fantastic, but if you really want a 13-year-old, it's truly disturbing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
one of the best so far...

I love all of the submissions from the Lessons so far, but this one, along with the other one on one encounters, are by far better, in my eyes. Keep up the awesome work, cant wait to keep reading.

ChucsSiteChucsSiteabout 15 years ago
I continue to

enjoy the "lessons" although I'm not sure this one was really a lesson. More like an experience and more real, I think, than many of the others. I'm not sure how real the male's spurting gobs and gobs of cum and often long distances, but it adds to the sensual scene that is being developed. Also, I think Tina is more normal than many of the sheltered girls in other episodes (Pam excluded - I'd like to hear more of Pam's experiences). This was a fun story and reminds me of the times I spent doing "things" in public.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Where ...

... the fuck was Tina when *I* was a TA? Well done and hot!

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