All Comments on 'The Lessons Ch. 20'

Oh myyyyyyy.... extremely well written and unbelievably HOT. My pussy is still throbbing. PLEASE continue on developing their love-affair! I can't wait for more!

One of the best series of stories i've ever read on this site! You have a masterful command of the English language and a kinky imagination -- which tends to make for excellent erotica. It's not just that you're good at writing -- there are plenty that are "good" at writing, and write very descriptive and intelligent pieces. What sets good erotica apart is the storytelling, the attention to detail that ENHANCES the story, rather than the kind that detracts from it. The majority of writers on here clutter stories with useless facts and narratives that are not erotic and have nothing to do with the story. So -- I don't have anything to critque really -- just positive reinforcement for a writer that has already received plenty. I started reading with chapter 20, and then went back and read the entire series ... and it's great stuff. Keep up the good work...

The scenes really were from the Lovely Anne website. How cool! It would be nice if they actually accompanied the story. I will read your future stories with more care!

what about Tricia ? she is the best charakter ,so pure ... And you can make tuff nut of her, for mr Peters ... sory for bad english ... You are very talented , best story series I've ever read ... story might start 1. with them going shoping new outfits for her , 2. modeling show with litle touching 3.day two , mr. Peters welcomes her in world , of alchohol , still nothing hapens , 4. day 3 he play role of god father , giving her full attention and spice it up with money 5.day 4 her 18 birthday he bay her a car , than going shoping second time but this time he pick litle extra... now he take her to motel ,she start modeling , he makes a drinks, litle extra comes in...he start shooting pictures of her, while she models , he make her dance for him , he tell her to strip to bra and panties while dancing , he still shoting , he now start recording , then he tells her to strip , unwillingly she start , then he give her a spank , telling her how she is a bad girl still recording.Next he black maill her , a tell her to sleep , becouse we will start making web site tommorow , this are just ideas , pllease write back i wont your opinion , with hope best regards

2 Down, 1 to go ?.......Will Mr Peters also take advantage of his youngest, Tricia, next ?

Good sense tells me the man should be put in manackles behind his back, and locked up ...for being a menace to society. But most of your stories about Mr Peters and his exploits are just too, too delicious !

Mr Peters seems to change his name very briefly...