All Comments on 'The Lieutenant's Adventure'

by SamuraiSword

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
work on the beginning

it was not a very good beginning. it was confusing and a bit out of order, but the description of the dance was hot. it made me feel like i was there.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Boring

Boring heternormative bullshit.

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