All Comments on 'The Loan Shark'

Can't wait to hear about next week.

Good overall but would have preferred her to remain more reluctant throughout, there was a very quick and big change from reluctance to her asking him to fuck her. Would have been much hotter if she'd been forced to enjoy it... that's just my opinion though.

Good balance overall, nice pacing.

As the reality of the new situation sinks in with Emily, after the surreal start of this surprise arrangement, it would make perfect sense that she might show more reluctance than she has so far, but would still give in. GrantLee's "Using Jill, Ch. 2," elsewhere on Literotica, provides a solid example of that kind of strategy used quite successfully, in my opinion.

“5ft 7, petite with perky little tits, she had retained her figure well. She had aged slightly but, at only 29, she still looked young”

Lol couldn’t get into it that is not petite and she is young not still looks young