All Comments on 'The Loners Ch. 17'

keep them coming. this story keeps getting better

As is the norm, a perfectly good vampire and human pairing gotta be ruined by human being turned. Well written story but I think if I reread it ill only go up to chap 11.

Wonderful chapter!!! Hopefully this is the start of a whole new world for the Trinity you've created. The balance between Rachel, Alan and Katie seems to fit better now. I think between the two, Rachel and Katie will keep Alan grounded enough too not get too full of himself. I'm wondering if a possible turn of Katie, might cause the Trinity to hold the powers of Dracula as three instead of one. My speculation, regardless wonderful story, no criticism here. Very much looking forward to the next chapter.

My man, this story is getting better and better.

Please, Hurry up with the next chapter!!

dracula is a title given to the strongest vampire so alan can still be dracula

Alan For Dracula

The campaign will never end

If we can have a black guy as president we can have a nerd as Dracula

Alan for Dracula!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Still kind of sad that it had to come to Alan becoming a vampire but I suppose it was going to happen eventually. I just hope that he retains his human qualities and that if he does end up becoming dracula that he'll be a benevolent leader of some kind.

Keep writing...

Omfg i kinda gessed he would be stronger. N might take on da lords but da way u wrote it made it seem worth while iv been readin dis story every sence 11:00pm n its 2:48am now..wow is all i wont to say ..love dis

I only wish you allowed Alan to father a child before this. Really sad.

See, leaving all the confidence that came with the turning, if Alan had had just 1% of the confidence he has now, still keeping his insecurities of course, the anal thing wouldn't have been a problem.