All Comments on 'The Long Hunt Ch. 02'

An engrossing read, can't get enough of this

A terrific story from a gifted writer. I can't wait for more. An easy five. Many thanks.

I wish it was longer ,but very good.

Bam! This story is really revving up. Where in the hell are you going with it? I love stories that build and have some mystery to them and this one is looking to be a good one. I hope that you write and submit chapters with regularity so my brain won't go in overload trying to figure out what I might imagine to be the direction you are taking us.

Thanks for the good start. I really enjoy your writing.

I absolutely love your character development so far. The images your writing creates are realistic in their fantasy.thank you for your time and effort

Something else...something HOT...something special...something of a curiosity that makes me want MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

And that is all I have to say about it.