by PlatypusJones
Something else...something HOT...something special...something of a curiosity that makes me want MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
I absolutely love your character development so far. The images your writing creates are realistic in their fantasy.thank you for your time and effort
Bam! This story is really revving up. Where in the hell are you going with it? I love stories that build and have some mystery to them and this one is looking to be a good one. I hope that you write and submit chapters with regularity so my brain won't go in overload trying to figure out what I might imagine to be the direction you are taking us.
Thanks for the good start. I really enjoy your writing.
A terrific story from a gifted writer. I can't wait for more. An easy five. Many thanks.