All Comments on 'The Long Weekend Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great story

Great start, couple of spelling mistakes but loved the way you built it up, nicely left open for follow up. Keep up good work.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 11 years ago
The odd writing slip

but a deliciously hot story

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Is she bred?

Hope there are more chapters that tell us what resulted from his cock shooting her pussy full of sperm. I love "knocked up" stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I assume we're not getting a sequel? It could really use one

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