All Comments on 'The Long Weekend: Sunday Morning'

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darkrage6darkrage6over 10 years ago

I would definitely say go for more sex, sometimes shorter is better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I was glad to see the focus more on Yvonne in this chapter. Not that I don't enjoy Sarah being around too, but Yvonne is the reason why I read these stories. As for your question, definitely focus more on the sex, even if that means shorter stories. There's no such thing as having too many sex scenes with Yvonne Strahovski.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
spinoff

what about a spinoff? see what these characters do after their encounter, meeting new people etc.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Maybe one of the girls use the strap on on Harry,

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