All Comments on 'The Lost Lamb'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Details?

So what happened? Did they make her climb a stair master for a few hours? Take a Zumba class? Move several boxes of books from the basement to the roof?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

What was the point of that? It's erotic fiction there is no point in leaving it to the imagination

PiodenPiodenabout 12 years ago
Loved it...

Ignore the last comments by the wankmeisters lacking imagination. I loved the way you left everything up in the air.

I hate the way that, here, really really good writing is marked down if it isn't your typical wank-fodder. What you imagine happening to the protagonist...well, that's in our own heads, but this was beautifully written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Good writing

Just too bad you didn't use your skills to fill in a few missing details.

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
CALL THE CPS

her ex, sit back and wait for the fan to get dirty. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

No detail, very poor

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