All Comments on 'The Lottery'

it wasn't a bad story, i was kind of disappointed that it was so short, and not at all what i expected. but that's me.

far too short. it has a lot of potential. There was inforamtion about the people / society that needs to be filled in to provide more background information. The protagonists weren't properly introduced, so when the names were given without any introduction, I was confused for a moment as to who 'Philip and Ani' were. There's very little description, or scene setting. I think if you extended it and rewrote it, it would be far more engaging.