All Comments on 'The Manager and the Barmaid Ch. 01'

by LuciousBi-Writes4U

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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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Interesting build up, can't wait to see where it goes.

tastefulladytastefulladyover 18 years ago
So Far So Good

I like it. I think I know where it is heading. But is it?

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
A good start

Good start....going on to read some more of this story. For your information as a writer: I never give a '100' unless there is actual fucking AND breeding....Hint, Hint!

Anyone can write a "Christian" romance!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hot begining

can't wait to hear the rest of the story...good to have you back LB!!

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