All Comments on 'The Massage'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Sensuous

Very sexy; please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
well written

A well written story that is in need of an editor. Good editing and a little more dialogue would make it outstanding.

mekakymekakyover 15 years ago
hot start

please continue

elledeeelledeeabout 14 years ago
Negress???

Aside from that word, I found the story to be superb. Descriptive but never coarse or vulgar. Extremely erotic. Other authors on this site should take note.

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