All Comments on 'The Massage Ch. 01'

What's with the double spacing and lack of paragraphs? And besides that the writing style made it distracting, boring, and uninteresting.

Without her husband around to complicate the affair. She could fuck Scott all afternoon while her husband is at work, and beg him to cum deep in her pussy.

Thanks for the post

For your information: masseuse is feminine; masseur is male. Scott is a masseur, not a masseuse. As for the story -- sounds too familiar.

Great story. Deserves to be continued. Of course it won't please those wimpy moralists who can't go any further than nice hubby-wife stories preferably in the morally approved missionary position.

Asking the wife for approval in advance is different but hot. My own story, "The Massage Gambit," posted last week is just the opposite -- the wife gets seduced by the masseur -- hey different strokes!

I agree with some of other comments about paragraphs, line-breaks, and switching of tense which did make the story harder to read -- but the action is hot!

This story was like a film with nice script and acting but dumb direction. The element that was missing from the story teller was the use of emotions. If he can improve on this part, it would be a wonderful story.