All Comments on 'The Massage Ch. 02'

Where did Dave go, and who is Pete?

Hi All

Sorry in my getting carried away with this story that Dave metamorphosed into Pete. Maybe it was his middle name? But it's my mistake. Will try to correct it but not sure how Litero copes with that...

Dude,

The story is awesome. Too bad more folks aren't open to learning about their sexuality and then sharing with others. The tale is well told with just the right level of description.

Please keep up the good work and don't worry about the unitentional shift to "Pete" at the end of Chapter 2. You utilize great creativity and I'm looking forward to more.

gary

what an erotic story very well written except you changed dave to peter...oh well great story do write more

The Dave character seemed like a nice guy, but I appreciated the plot even more when I took his place. I didn't even realize I was bisexual until author maudecardy showed me how open-minded the Peter character was. Despite the surprising metamorphosis in this story, Maude is a very talented author. I look forward to reading more of her massage contributions here.

Power to the Peters!

Simply put everyone has fantasies/curiousities of sex with the same. This story enlightens and encourages those to explore those desires. I have longed for this type of experience but in the swinging circle it is taboo for men but encouraged for women. I find that to be a very unfair standard to both sexes. Sure wish I knew the author personally....

Fabulous. Although the names seemed to change in the end.

Very nice story hot and please tell us more