All Comments on 'The Medical Record Ch. 04'

He is surprised his wife is a lying cheating betraying slut? She is just a piece of meat for his friend and his wife to enjoy. The woman doesnt love him, probably never did. He was a meal ticket and a free ride. Now she can play that game alone. As a single woman she can bed as many men as she wants. But that has some hazards for her. His problems are over, depression?? Why should he be in a depression? He should be glad he was able to see thru the smoke, realize what was happening, and smart enough to walk away from a adulterous slut that lies with every breath. time to go out and find a real woman!

Very good so far, about time he woke up and found out the truth about her. Let him be a man not a wimp or cuckold and finish his marriage only after he finds out who the others are. Keep up the good writing.

no common sense at all the hubby was the biggest dumby of all time.you already having problems and you go and let her talk you into swapping.wife drug him and wife lover drug him,with all the drugs it could've killed the hubby.the wife was a whore from the jumb,she was having someone else baby.the writer make the hubby look like a complete moron.

I finally "saw" the man. He has character. You may love somebody, but when that person's selfish pleasures betray trust to the point of even putting in danger the well being of a spouse, it's over. I'm glad he realized that for his safety. He deserves better.

I commented on parts 1&2 and have just read 3&4. I still contend that this story would have worked better with an editor. There is a good idea in here for a story but I think it would have worked better if it had been written in the third person. Writing it from John's point of view forced you to put words in his mouth. This made him look as if he couldn't put 2 and 2 together hence so many negative comments about him. You have good ideas for stories, keep writing. I have decided that I would torch Bob, Janet and Jennifer.

I think an epilogue would be appropriate in this story.

Boyd

The first chapter had some continuity problems but

since then you have been hitting on all cylinders.

One problem on literotica is that most of us do not

have the patience to let the author build a story.Some of

us must be jumping directly to the last page from the first!

Thanks!

Bruce

Great Story:

About another Thing! How does His wife Know that morning after pills make her nauseated??

Regards: Bill

<p>I don't normally leave comments until the end, but if you are planning on going where I'd hope you are, then you've written a better story than I'd thought.</p>

<p>I won't speculate though, so I'll just wait and see.</p>

<p>Let me just comment that it's interesting to see how many people just jump to conclusions as to what Janet intended.</p>

<p>All she said was "Jennifer and I can find a way for the three of to enjoy ourselves again without John's getting all bent out of shape."</p>

<p>Where'd it say she was cheating? It only said they had to find a way to keep John happy or at least getting angry.</p>

<p>But no! All the insecure wacos here (and I'll include John) are ready to crucify her.</p>

<p>Oh and get an editor, for f*#k's sake!</p>

"Janet, I believe you about the condom thing. Your drugging me in cahoots with Bob and Jennifer and then intending to keep it secret is still very bothersome." <p>

"John, I was going to tell you everything in a few days when this all settled down. I knew if I told you now that what has happened, would happen. Believe me, I will not have secrets from you. I just had not had the opportunity to tell you." <p>

"Janet, it would have been better to tell me you thought I might have an acute erectile dysfunction and then suggest I take a Viagra. I was thinking about that anyway (I lied but would have done it with her suggestion). Do you see how we are not communicating about the important things that affect our marriage?" <p>

"Janet, I understand why you did this but disagree with your reasoning and with your mistrust about my decision to allow the swap to happen. From my point of view, we need not discuss this further. Let's just agree to disagree. I do love you and I want you believe in me." <p>

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What kind of fuckin' dialogue is that? A spouse and her sexual cohorts drugged you and you say it is a "bothersome" thing??? <p>

Is there ANY BRAIN CELL up there?, doc? <p>

The whole thing is total gibberish nonsense! And I don't even care about the single letters, "f", "t", etc. appearing throughout the various pages.... Those are minor typoes; it's the story that is total nonsense. <p>

Please, if you gonna write, simply write A STORY and then post it in Literotica. Don't write "a Literotica story" targeting specically just a few braindead cheerleaders with pink pompoms!

Some comments said he must be a dumb doctor. His wife said he is very intelligent. He himself says he is quite able to

read people having the sixth sense to read between the lines. It is certainly confusing to see him so insecure.

The inconsistencies in the story make it indeed somewhat confusing. He takes the high stand about truth and trust in the founding of their marriage (but has secretly fucked her sister when she was apparently not even aware of it which makes it worse and immoral) and they claim that neither had withheld anything from the other, sharing in honesty and no skeletons in their closets, they say to have nothing to confess... When he confronted her with the file, he believed to see no guilt and only confusion on her face, she looked him straight in the eye and stressed never have been unfaithful.

After the swap, he felt a cheater, was crushed in his own soul and integrity, their marriage lost the sexual purity and their exclusive physical relationship (then what about his fuck with her sister ?) etc ...

He had his tubes clipped 12 years before this happened with her sister which was some 8 years before he found out.

While he was fertile before and his wife was not using protection eversince, how come she was never pregnant again for some 20 years when one time sloppy seconds made her sister pregnant ??

And why was Janet nauseaed with a morning after pill ??

What about the STD ? If it was Janet indeed, why did he not get infected ? Why did Janet say Bob was just "another" sextoy.

The good doctor said not being able to think straight and rational because of his emotions. That's believable but that condition does not last when you start questioning some facts. Being a smart doctor he surely should have investigated further before the swap and having himself tested for fertility should not be a problem being a doctor himself, even anonymously.

There are other questions that remain unanswered but it's

up to the author to bring the answers to us readers, hopefully in a clear way. We all can guess and/or propose an ending from our own perspective, but I find it more interesting to see how the author develops his story. If you don't like it or the characters in it, why not write your own ending.

G.Belgium

I think you captured the emotions of a reluctant swap participant, on the morning after, completely. I look forward to how you handle the rest of your tale.

morning after pills. More than once? And not Bob as he could proscribe them himself.<P>

Her words on the pills will come back to him as he rethinks her calls.

Once again dear author - your imagination is quite good but you need another set of eyes to grow faster and better. Is it pride refusing to ask for an editor?<P>

All in all author - you are a fresh breeze of consequential reality although somewhat rough yet.

With High Regard

<p>There was a lot of talk here, making me think that our hero was a lawyer and not a doctor. In any event, he seems at first to accept being drugged but then grows upset at being lied to again. I found that response unbelievable.</p>

<p>Then you rushed the ending. Our husband cannot even make definitive statements that the marriage is over. He leaves a small door of uncertainty open in his decision. Even in humiliation that man is afraid to show righteous indignation.</p>

<p>My fear here is that you will follow up this chapter with yet another. <b>Please don't.</b></p>

The wife is a slut, he has known this deep down the whole time. That is what is at the base of his feelings about this affair. She and Bob want each other and will risk pregency, divorce, loss of a friendship, everything to be together. He needs to walk away and not look back. The trust is gone, he knows they will lie, drug him or anything else and not really care how he feels about it. When you wake up in the morning and the smell of another man on your wife makes you sick, then she discovers she could be pregenant with another mans child , you discover two people lied to you and drugged you, and your wife doesn't want to have sex with you, but dose and will with the other man, how can any body think this is good for the marriage. I don't understand the tears and carying on by the wife, this is what she really wants and needs,let him go.

There are just too many inconsistencies. At the end of ch. 3, John and Janet (Janet again, not Susan) both took showers before they went to bed. How in the world did they have crusted pussy juice (John) and crusty semen (Janet) on their pubic hairs when they awakened in the morning, with additional semen running out of Janet that was originally Bob's? How is it that John did not ask Bob (his best friend, yeah, some friend) about a prior vasectomy? And I still have a problem with John's being the father of Sis's aborted fetus, considering that he had a vasectomy after his youngest child. At least, the author should explain more to avoid these inconsistencies . . . Finally, I can't fathom why both John and Janet did not go to counseling when the mistrust issues first surfaced? Swapping is hardly the answer. And if John fucked "Sis" while she was stoned on the bed, why his "holier than thou" pretensions? I hope ch. 5 will clear all this up.

Skillfully written and designed to make the reader sympathize with Doc, except that I find Doc's repeated assumption that he has a natural right to control their conversation, a right to eavesdrop on her private conversations, etc a bit irritating. It is obvious that she is hot to trot with Bob in or out of a swapping environment, so I can understand his inclination to end the marriage. I agree with him --just stop the control thing.

the Ct Yankee

John, Janet, Jeanette, Jennifer. Is that how badly you don't know the roots of Western names? If so, you might as well be consistent and call everyone John: Shouldn't Bob be Ian and Susan is really Jannis?

His lies - her lies - their lies -

Great relationships here - and of course egos to beat the band

Mr Intuition is a bit/very slow on figuring out the obvious. Not slow on the reaction though

I'm not surprised this went this way. As soon as Janet kept keeping things from him, and then drugging him, I knew it was over.

But now I'm wondering, what if she finds out about him and Sis from before? He's a bit of a hypocrite for not telling her in my opinion, but then Humans are quite stupid about a lot of things, and not logical when it comes to love or marriage so it's par for the course.

Trust this, trust that, oh i love you. If this really is based on a true story please tell whoever the "so called man" in this story that i am a nigerian prince and i need his help to access some huge bank accounts. I cannot do it without his help. You can tell him that my address is urschafcknidiot at icntwttofckuovr dot com.

If it's not a true story then you managed to write one of the shittiest stories ever. I skipped passed alot of the content because it's so infuriating. There is nobody to root for. In the end the mc deserved everything he got because everything was so upfront and obvious only someone with serious brain issues would believe it all.

15 years ago someone wrote that this story is skillfully written and it was done so that people would sympathise with doc. That person is quite possibly drinking sewage water on a regular basis and an avid consumer of Tucker Carlson, Alex Jones and Q Anon.

No other explanation fits with such a comment.

One thing in this part that should have been addressed by John and was not. Was the statement she made about the morning after pill. She was able to explain away the condom comment. However, she said and I quote "I have to have John get me the morning after pill" Then here is the part he should have confronted her with this quote "They make nauseated as all get out, but I won't get pregnant". I would have like to heard her describe how she knew it would make her nauseated. Just what I noticed there.