All Comments on 'The Merger Ch. 02'

This was a very hot story- you really handled the situation well, it flowed nicely and had awesome detail. Can't wait to see what happens next.

oh yes well written can't wait for the next chapter this is htting up nicely

Love the concept and extremely well written. Keep up the good work!!

The careful set up of chapter one really pays off here. Perfect sexy story with power play and twisted relationships, exceptionally well-told with great detail and good insight into the central character. The basic story is hot, but the way it's told, seeming somehow feasible, that makes it so damn sexy. A story easily worthy of a hot hot hot rating, I hope there's lots more to come...

This is very inticing and I cant wait to see where the next chapters lead....

Brilliant - keep up the excellent work

GRAT STORY. CAN;T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. WENT BACK AND READ YOUR LAST STORY. I WOULD LOVE TO SEE A CONTINUATION OF THAT.

This is so hot - it's such a shame you've stopped writing - I really want more!