All Comments on 'The Midnight Train'

the supreme prize for showing off (as well as much more than a mere 5 for writing... ).

Wow great story you got a real gift

We have missed you. We discovered your work through Jake's Wonderland. He hasn't written anything in awhile either. Your writing is so hot. Please submit more soon. Thanks

Great to have you back!

I've read all your stories. Every one has been excellent. I'm really glad you're posting again.

I've missed your profile pictures, too. They were as beautiful as your writing. It's too bad Literotica no longer allows authors to post nude photos, but even a clothed picture would be wonderful.

excellent...and a very well done, very hot piece of writing. the northeastern railway system may never be the same after jennifer's been there! thank you.

I don't think you'd manage so well in the UK Jenn. British Rail isn't up to you.

Love Rob

VERY nice story Jenn!

Your writing keeps me hoping that I can meet a beautiful woman in a clandestine rendezvous.... Oh well... .someday I hope!

so hot, so realistic...

great sex in the dark with a stranger - being slyly watched by another - damn.....

the autobiographical nature of your writing really really adds a lot!!

Excellent female perspective gives this story enhanced eroticism.

Aside from a grammar issue here and there, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Will NEVER forget the sight of you that night. Thanks for the memories.

I also love the Philly/New Haven connection having attended a certain institute of higher learning in West Philly for so many years and coming from an old Yale family. I just love your writing, your intelligence, your eroticism, your artisty and of course your thread and pictures and insights. Love how you get toasted too ;) so yet another bit of appreciation from a crazy old preppy in China for you.

Hot story!

All of your stories are amazing! I'm sad to see that you haven't written anything new in the last few years. I hope you continue your adventures and maybe share some more with us!

An Amazingly erotic story, well written well balanced and very sensual. Thank You for sharing your talent.

Incredibly sexy!

great demonstration of your fet, even if it's just one person...

What Train was it? I need to meet this man. one hot 5* story

Whew ! Hotter than hell. The inadvertent sex in a situation like that can be out of this world. Incredibly erotic sex scene. Even hotter when she mentioned that her hubby wanted her to do stuff like that. I could hardly breathe while this amazing sex scene was happening. I have to give you 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s since 10 isn’t available. Haha. Great writing. Loved it !

So very, very hot. And you also know how to build a story and let it push the reader forward