All Comments on 'The Minotaur'

Nice twist on the minotaur story. Throughly enjoyed it. Keep it up :)

Iiked it. But I'd like to see more of what happened to the minator and the girl. Did he change back into a man, did they stay together, kids....

Thanks! I really wrestled with where to draw the line in this story. I could easily have gone on but it needed to end at some point and I tend to be of the "leave 'em wanting more" mindset so I cut it in a place where the reader could take it further in their mind if they wished. I totally get your point, though.

Loved this refreshing retelling of the minotaur.

"I could easily have gone on but it needed to end at some point"

... Nooooooo, I think great stories can always go on and on!

I would also love to read more about Kasuma and the minotaur. I'm thinking that the minotaur didn't appear to the last gladiator because it was less frightening, and therefore safer, to have Kasuma act as the guide ...?

A wonderful read.

I think it needed just a little more detail at the end on what the children were like and maybe some more info on the couple !

Ok first I will say that I think this is a great story. The only thing I would have done differently would to have the curse broken. Then they and their children all could of lived happily ever after outside the Labyrinth.

Damn. Nice story! Excellent descriptions and setup, first and foremost. Not too much detail as to have the introduction be endless, but enough to really pull the reader in, which was great. It got a bit dark in places, especially in the beginning. My favorite stuff 🖤🕊 Towards the end of his life, Arator became kinda annoying calling himself the Mighty, so good riddance lol

A quick death making him seem unimportant was actually suitable. And then Kasuma was left with our well hung Boi the minotaur 😏

10 years later than everyone else, I'd like to say that I know stories have to end somewhere and this is as good a place as any to end. If I'd have liked to see more of something, it'd be more sex with the minotaur's magnificent monster cock 😂 If you're ever interested in writing a porn without plot sequel and kinda reaaaally hammer in the magnificence. Of the cock. Lol anyway I'm mostly joking. These are your stories to write or not however you see fit! So I'll take any amount of porn I can get. That magnificence though... gonna ponder of that for a bit

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11/10!!!!!