All Comments on 'The Mirage of Control Ch. 01'

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ohioohioover 13 years ago
Maybe a little clichéed, but still worth reading.

A powerful beginning--above all (for me) because of the tension involved in how far Jodi will go, how far she will humiliate Wess, in order to get Phil's cock. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

Thanks, ohio

racfguyracfguyabout 8 years ago
Phil is

an asshole

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