All Comments on 'The Mysterious Mr. X'

I enjoyed the beginning, although the details were missing. It would have been nice to spend more time with the characters before changing the nature of the relationship from sexual to romantic. Also, it was pretty clear from the beginning where the story was headed, so why not spend more time making it very clear why the two arevdrawn together?

Lovely story Janie

Chris

Nice tale Janiexx!!!!!! Thanks! I always look forward to your new works! This was very good.

To be honest, I was not entirely sure where the story would end, but I had an idea... however it was not until the final scene that I realized the fairy-tale ending :-) Keep up the great work janiexx :-)

that was gorgeous! Nice storytelling Janiexx.

Hi Janie

I loved this story and the element of mystery.

Hope you have more in the making.

Well Jane, I missed this one! However, it is well up to your usual excellent standard. If anything, your writing has improved considerably. Unlike your usual offerings, this tale is an excellent "stand alone" effort and was an extremely enjoyable read. Sorry for the late comment but I didn't get an "early warning" email from you for this one!! Pete.

Powerful in it's simplicity. Seductive in it's elegance. Touching.