All Comments on 'The Need for Fresh Vegetables Ch. 01'

the story is excellent. . . very nice use of words to express emotions and feeling associated. please do bring in part two with your sister or mother doing it along you.

or just create another story, this time with the milk man

be my slut darling

regards

sau.

dear ..... felt like commenting again....one among the best... wish there was more teasing.... but still great....

Babli,

I have read many of your stories and all are excellent. Looking forward to your comments on my stories.

Keep creating such characters and their erotic moments..

write more

Excellent story, can relate to your setting for the village,as a PIO, good writing about village life.

Excellent story. The build up and atmosphere was perfect.

Hey, you are a good writer and thinker. Make it more rough and wild. You also will enjoy it.