All Comments on 'The Neighborly Thing To Do'

about Sheila's fun with the neighbor, and anyone else for that matter.

What happened next.....???

You worked me into a pretty good frenzy. Thank you very much for your work, and keep more coming. I have to go now, as I need to go clean off my keyboard, my monitor, oh, and the floor... dam, the wall too.

Really good....what happens next

What an outstanding piece of erotica! Bravo! My only lament is that you have only two submissions to Literotica. More!

What an outstanding piece of erotica! Bravo! My only lament is that you have only two submissions to Literotica. More!

I'm sure she told her loving husband what she and his good friend did - and I'm sure she wants her husband to fuck his good friends wife for fairness sake - otherwise she and his good friend would just be quietly cheating and cuckolding him the poor stupid but loving father(?). Oh, the children mentioned many times certainly added to the erotic sensuality of your story - why is that? Perhaps you can do better as it was well written but the sequell will no doubt clear all this up. You see it's not about morality - it's about respect which can be erotic. Regards

Need the sequel where the husband catches them, beats neighbor to a pulp and bounces her ass down to the curb!

You can't tempt us with Dave talking about the next time. Write the sequel. Now.

Since this fic is 8 years old I am not holding my breath. What a shame because I rarely rate storys this high.

You have done an excellent job here. Descriptions of people and their neighborhood were just enough to establish a scene. No extra adverbs nor flowery adjectives to muddle the works intent. I think you have an excellent style.

Keep it up. Not necessarily with these people but with your story writing.

would love a follow on.

Great story. Any chance for a sequel?

I always dislike cheating spouses! Maybe there could be a sequel both of them find out how their spouses are cheating with someone And let them feel some betrayal.