by RiversEdge2010
Great Story. Any healthy sexually liberated couple would love having such as experience. I only wish it were actually a true story from your own experiences.
excellent story! generally, I think many of these stories could use a little more detailed description of penises, pussies - slow detail. other than that you're a very fine writer, thanks!
I did the 1st one, and I see where you're going with this :)
Oh ps, this is just another alter ego..you know who I am .. Ill mail u ;)
Very nice build up..could have added some more spice like projecting as if Lana was engaged or had a BF
really liked the first part, hope the second will be up soon; love the concept with the facial fetish and hope you will extend this in thee following chapters
Well contructive, very hot(at least for me). Hope there is a continuation, loved it.
I liked the way you portrayed each character. You know it's awkward to invite somebody to participate in something so personal. The ending was well constructed to leave an opening to a sequel. I am looking forward to the next part of this series.