All Comments on 'The Neighbor's Daughter'

Great story... there was enough at the beginning to set up a good story... and a great ending with lots of sex... I loved it...

not that well written and a typical story of a woman who screws her life up by bedding all the wrong men then wants a daddy to solve her problems by knocking her up.

Is that installment 2? How I got trapped by a tease.

Why don't you write a story warning men about these idiots who come around and dump their baggage on men's doorsteps after they have the fun.

Well, I say he is full of drap!!! It is not only the younger ladies that have problems with their dumbassed husbands, it's all of the women!! And we men are at fault!! I'll take a younger woman anytime over an older one!! They seem to have more life to them, and are more willing to try different things with us old fogeys that let our youth pass us by beefore we realized there was a lot of things we hadn't tried!!

Any way--I thought it was a good story. Could have used some editing---grammer and spelling---but I loved it anyway!!

As another 'old fogey' I loved it. You're a great writer.

Crap to Typical - who's already full of it!

Lukas