All Comments on 'The Neru'bian Chronicles Ch. 01'

Looks like the beginning of a great story. :)

I know this is way off topic but Hawkeye XD totally reminds me of LT Hawkeye from FMA. Dont mind me its my inner anime geek on the rampage agen.lol :-P

Anon let your geek out!! So much of this is inspired by anime!

Amazing story. Looking forward to reading more. and im a total geek!!Attack on titan all the way on this one. Happiness overload:) keep up the good work!

Can't wait to see where this journey takes us.

Awesome start I'm already hooked on this story, just like your other one 'Dusk before Dawn' which btw I hope to read more of some day. I also love how you said this was a bit anime inspired since i'm total anime geek myself (really love my yaoi) though it does get a bit avatar with the whole glowing plants thing lol. Anyway I can't wait to read the next chapter and I hope its a bit longer. Again great job! :)

Loving this story and the plot and can't wait to see where it goes.

However, I do have to say it needs proof reading. There are various grammar or spelling mistakes. A couple of the 'your' should be 'you're' as in 'you are'. Various places should have commas to break up the sentances to make it read and flow better.

4 stars for this

I like it, It's a very good start but it is very Avatar

Why is this chapter 1 if there are no further chapters?