All Comments on 'The New Apartment'

by Piratica

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oldwinooldwinoalmost 17 years ago
Very Hot Story

Great too short story.

Hope you follow up with even hotter public exhibitions.

Salvor-HardonSalvor-Hardonalmost 17 years ago
Wonderful story!

Piratica, welcome to Lit, and what a great way to get started! A very nice piece that builds through some sex scenes to climax profoundly with the embarrassment and thrill of sex for an audience. I was moved. Can't wait to read more!

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