All Comments on 'The New Babysitter Ch. 01'

Could have been more erotic. Sounded sorta tame to what it could have been...

loved it

good job pardon the pun

the only thing i didn't like was the grand you gave her

the girl loved you, paying her was an insult.

let her give it back to you in the next chapter.

saying something like, my mom would kill her, and you if she saw that amount of money. anyway good story

keep it comming

a fan

It had no flow, jumped around too much, abrupt and unbelievable!

No wonder his wife left him; he was rough and crude, with no finesse or control.

Not that the premise could not have worked, single father with buxom teenage beauty of single mother next door babysits for him, turns out that he is a dom and she a sub with mutual satisfaction to be found for both. But the declarations of love within hours of meeting each other, all that money being thrown around. Even the sudden touches out at the pool when she had been so embarassed and shy acting before. I just think it needed more work.

I thought the story was very hot and want to read more. Bring on the next chapter