by hullguy20
I really liked the build up in this story. The sex was hot. I hope to read more about this couple.
I second the previous comment. It would be nice to know how the relationship between this couple develops. There is clearly more to be written, and worth reading.
For a first effort, I think it was good. Like the other commenters, I hope to see more. Thanks for taking the time to write it, and congratulations on having the guts to share it with us.