by Belegon
This is MY fantasy! How did you steal it from my head? Awesome beginning; please keep it going.
Jenna
I like this beginning!! Looks like this could be a really hot story.
This certainly is a nice start. I enjoyed reading it and will look out for the next bit.
This is pure crap. I think most people I know on this site can write better.
Brings back old memories. Sure you didn't write this for North Carolina?
Love the two household approach.
Look forward to the next chapter.
You two work really well together. I hope chapter two isn't too far away. I want to know how the dinner went!!!
;-)
That's my kind of dinner and a show. ;) So glad I don't have to wait for the next part!