All Comments on 'The New Neighbors Ch. 01'

by Belegon

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Mmmm...

That's my kind of dinner and a show. ;) So glad I don't have to wait for the next part!

doormousedoormouseover 19 years ago
Yummy

You two work really well together. I hope chapter two isn't too far away. I want to know how the dinner went!!!

;-)

Jack EagleJack Eaglealmost 20 years ago
Chapter 2?

Brings back old memories. Sure you didn't write this for North Carolina?

Love the two household approach.

Look forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
crap crap and more crap

This is pure crap. I think most people I know on this site can write better.

Black TulipBlack Tulipalmost 20 years ago
Nice

This certainly is a nice start. I enjoyed reading it and will look out for the next bit.

_Bob__Bob_almost 20 years ago
Very good beginning

Nice start, please keep it going.

Nightowl21Nightowl21almost 20 years ago
A good story so far

I like this beginning!! Looks like this could be a really hot story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
HOT!

This is MY fantasy! How did you steal it from my head? Awesome beginning; please keep it going.

Jenna

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