by b32145623
The highest praise I have is that it's like A Tempting Vacation by JackKing, my favorite story on this site. Amazing work, can't wait to find out what comes next.
I was a little put off by the beginning of the story, as it felt like it took too long for you to identify the protaganist as a man. As you got into the meat of the story, however, it got very good very quickly. Very hot and sexy, with a lot of potential for different interactions. One thing, though. Does our hero have a name? For the life of me, I don't recall seeing his name, and for a guy starting a new job, you would think his name would come up at least once.
I was laughing so hard. The story has these unreal tidbits like penis measurements and co-ed gym. However, everything else is toned serious enough to send the mind imagine those things for real.
The descriptions of the women are wonderful. I could paint them gorgeously in my mind.
the story is just great already and I'm looking forward to read more parts to see how it goes on ...
I LOVE this story. Perfect grammar, interesting characters who actually display flashes of personality, and hot as hell. Just a tremendous job. Definitely adding this one as a favorite. Can't wait to read Part 2.
Great combination of comedy, erotica and good writing.
Very enjoyable.
Thank you.