by lankancd
I like your story line, & very well written. Please continue your adventure. The grammar is a lot better than some who use English as a 1st language.
...And I agree, you're grammar and spelling are better than many who only know english. Can't wait to learn more (a lot more?) about this young guy with the wrong suitcase that decides to become a young girl. I can see lots of possibilities, can't wait to see what you do with them! Thanks for sharing your fantasy with us, hope to see another chapter soon.