- NonHuman
- The Newborn Ch. 05
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All Comments on 'The Newborn Ch. 05'
by Daniellekitten
- 14 Comments
JazCullenover 14 years agoSo glad you wrote another chapter to this tale. I've been checking back often to see the next instalment :-)
mariasmdover 14 years agoim happy that you havent forgotten about his one. poor deanna!
you and jazcullen are my favorites!
spearman1about 14 years agoI thought you would never get back to this story but I'm so glad you did.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoIm not a fan of rape especially between parents ans kids. It really didnt it at all. It makes me not want to read any more of it. Demons forcin Dean and Deanna was ok but Dean forcin Deanna and usin 2 men to do it too was just way to bad for me. If i wanted a rape story I would read stroies from Nonconsent.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoI absolutely agree with the other anonymous reader, this story has deteriorated from a romantic, erotic one to one of pure trahs! I am very disapointed and I will not read anymore of your lowlife stories!
Ozgal28almost 14 years agoYes maybe not the best route for the story to go, but obviously this is where the characters lead you to. The storyline between the two main characters is fantastic and I can't wait to read what happens with them. I trust in you, given all the stories of yours that I have read that this was a necessity and not some drama point. Your other readers should trust you as well.
katgoddessover 13 years agoThe whole rape business is not simply gratuitous violence or a cheap thrill but serves a purpose. It is intended to show the evil that threatens everyone, the evil that Sabra is supposed to save them from. It is just a plot mechanism, not the point of the story. Keep writing, I really want to know how this turns out.
Anonymousover 13 years agoI love your stories. You are one of my favorite authors. I can't wait to see how this ends! Please keep them coming =)
lili82over 13 years agoplease learn how to spell before you trash someone's work! you can't come and say a story is T-R-A-S-H if you spell a very simple word (trash) T-R-A-H-S! and this ain't trash! oh and for the other poster; it's B-E-T-T-E-R not B-T-T-E-R!
ladybug71about 13 years agoI hope that you will finish out the story of Ben and Sabra....it really is a great story so far. I'd like to see what Natasha's part will be in the story and how Deanna will survive what the deamons are doing to her.
devilcowgurl6almost 13 years agoI wanna know what happens next! If ben can save his new wife (I hope he can)
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