All Comments on 'The Next Chapter Ch. 02'

by JLCC

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darkdance69darkdance69over 9 years ago
Nice

I gave it 4 stars. It is shaping up to be a nice, romantic story with only a hint of actual incest. An adult step-daughter becoming active with her deceased mother's widower is a little taboo, but almost not firmly in the taboo category.

Steve's feelings of guilt are realistic for a decent, upstanding guy moving on with his life and a nice touch.

JLCCJLCCover 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks DD

A confession that may well sink me in this category: I enjoy some of the full-on tales, but couldn't bring myself (yet) to go full monty as a writer on the incest. Maybe one day...

Dark_Angel21Dark_Angel21over 9 years ago
Please be more

I have read many stories like this one and I gotta say this is one of the best I've read in a while. I really do hope there is going to be more. I enjoyed this one so much. Very well done ;)

JLCCJLCCover 9 years agoAuthor
Chapter 3 is not far off.

Thank you DarkAngel. I've enjoyed writing about Steve and Maddie but encountered some unexpected story challenges. I am glad that some have found my outcomes satisfying.

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