All Comments on 'The Non-Standard Man Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Awesome! Such an interesting well written story

Thankyou for chapter6! pf

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I was really enjoying this story

and then you had to go and FUCK it up by making it sound like a scene from I Robot

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
okay

I started this story while waiting for a few novellas to post new chapters and I must say that I am impressed. I am enjoying the plot line thus far and am very interested to see where the characters take you. If you are in need of editors, let us know; I'd be more than happy to volunteer my time.

Ryan

MissPrimMissPrimover 9 years agoAuthor
Thank You

Ryan,

Thank you for your kind offer to edit. Please PM me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
cliffhanger

chapters are short but manage a little story each time :)

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Annoyingly cheerful in the morning. Thankfully, that wears off by the end of the day. Have no cats, 4 adult children, and no boyfriends. Hmmm, something is not quite right here. Writing is my day job.