All Comments on 'The Not-So-Innocent Voyage Ch. 01'

I groaned when I got to the "to be continued", you made me care about the characters! Looking forward to the next installment.

You are expanding the characters and the plot. I expect Mandy to extend the evening.

Please continue, as it has my interest piqued. thanks

You got me hooked, please continue.

Please don't be one of those authors who fall off the face of the earth? You have been silent for 18 months, tho so I guess so. If not, please finish or at least outline the rest of the story for us!

Have you expanded this story anymore and, if so, where can I find it? I certainly hope you have. Great story so far.

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