All Comments on 'The Not-So-Innocent Voyage Ch. 01'

by Cndrlla69

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Mrwonderfull42Mrwonderfull42over 6 years ago
Please, more!

Have you expanded this story anymore and, if so, where can I find it? I certainly hope you have. Great story so far.

Mrwonderfull42@gmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Please Continue

Please don't be one of those authors who fall off the face of the earth? You have been silent for 18 months, tho so I guess so. If not, please finish or at least outline the rest of the story for us!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great Start

You got me hooked, please continue.

diverbossdiverbossover 10 years ago
great story

Please continue, as it has my interest piqued. thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good Writing

You are expanding the characters and the plot. I expect Mandy to extend the evening.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Want more!

I groaned when I got to the "to be continued", you made me care about the characters! Looking forward to the next installment.

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