- NonConsent/Reluctance
- The Novice
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All Comments on 'The Novice'
by wishfulthinking
- 246 Comments
Anonymous7 months agoPlease take a course in Female Anatomy. You will find that the Hymen is not half way up the vagina!! Maidenhead as you call it, sorry I laughed at that as Maidenhead is a town near where I live, it's near Windsor!! And some girls are born without Hymen's, some with very small ones, every woman is different!! And it doesn't completely cover the entrance to the vagina, otherwise how would menstrual blood come out?!! Apart from that, you start serial stories off but don't finish them. Maybe there should be an * by the stories anyone writes but doesn't finish, so we can decide whether to read them or not....and as you have not finished this one, not reading any more, as what's the point with no ending?!! From Frustrated of near Maidenhead 🤣 !!
Anonymousover 1 year agofantastic. i’m wondering when i can become an Counselor at a convent just like these guys
i’ve heard “real” stories about similar goings on at convents over the years , but doubted any widespread ( sorry for that word) veracity. I wonder if our Holy Mother ; The Church is as delightful or sinful as we’re seeing here., but I’d sure like to be able to enjoy and to give enjoyment without any penalty like these dudes , no ?
“The Saints preserve us ! “
andrewm57over 3 years agoI can't tell you how many otherwise well written stories are ruined by the fact that the hymen is *not* somewhere "up inside" the vagina.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoit is so rare nowadays that I find an erotica that makes me want to touch myself so badly.. your writing is exquisite and I have a terrible priest fetish since the Original Sinners came out. Please, please continue this..
Anonymousover 6 years agoThis is s wonderful story.. well written, just enough action, but another cliff hanger. Nothing has been added since 2004. Sad really, had so much potential.
SubmissiveAudreyalmost 7 years agoWOW! First this is extremely well written with a great deal of detail! I loved how it has just enough detail but not too much where it becomes boring. Second, this is a HOT story that I was able to relate to as my name is Audrey and I almost became a nun!!! Hand to GOD! Wild! Needless to say, I was able to enjoy this thoroughly! ;) Also I'll be reading the rest of the stories but right now I'm kind of sorry to say rooting for "Lucas" ;)
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoShe really wants to be a woman. Plow through that maiden head, get her pregnant then marry her. She will then be ready for a house full of kiddies. It sounds to me that is what she really desires deep down in her lustful heart. Enjoy!
sharrigirl56over 7 years agoplease dont leave us hanging at this point in your story......you must continue.....thanx sharri
Anonymousover 7 years agoU have coupled the exact right balance of beauty and lust😊BRAVO fromHoneyGirl and, YES, more is very welcome😁
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoYour story is wonderful, I love all your writings. The depth of the storylines, and how you draw your readers in is fantastic, and as always proper grammer and spelling really lets things flow. However the description of the "not quite sex" between Aubrey and Lukas really threw me because such a thing would not be possible due to the hymen not being inside the vagina, but at the beginning. No penetration can occur without going through that membrane. At best one can put the cock between the labia, or press it against the hymen. And hymens are stretchy, so that can be a thing, and enjoyable too. But the cock would not be inside. Again, you are a wonderful writer, and I hope you will continue writing many more brilliant stories! I am so appreciative of authors like you who create such good erotica.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoI keep coming back to this series. Please please give us more of this incredibly hot series.
brandnewpetover 8 years agoOver the years, I still find myself coming back to this story, including its following chapters.
Compelling, well-written, and deliciously salacious. If you ever find yourself wanting to add more chapters to it, I certainly won't complain. ;)
Apple_of_Edenalmost 10 years agoVery "enjoyable" story telling. Please continue the story. You have left it open ended, so there are a number of paths it could take. I would be interested in reading which one you choose. I enjoyed your writing style and of course the content very much. Please, continue....
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI certainly would be one of those nuns fingering myself, but please, more
Anonymousabout 10 years agoThat was so amazing... I don't know how many times I came, but seriously, you have talent! Please please keep writing!!!!
altc6about 10 years agoYou have to keep going please please. I can't lie, I played with my cunt while I read this glorious story. I came shockingly hard at your words. MMM. I need more!
Anonymousover 10 years agoBy chance, did you take adderall before commencing your "Gothic" paper?
Anonymousover 10 years agoOne of the best young innocent girl stories I have read. Very exciting so far and I hope it has many more episodes.
Anonymousover 10 years agoyes
i'm into gothic and working on a paper on the goth Jews (and NOT Christians)--the history, etc. Actually, not Christians. Everybody knows about that. Boring.
(a lot of people don't know Judaism has gothic history, art, literature, etc. it's online--architecture, etc.
The gothic in Jewish culture--just look it up. It's fascinating. There's some quality like that of Gogol's "Dead Souls" --I think--in many of the stories. Darkness, raisins, cockroaches, cockroaches that look like raisins on the walls in an inn ... black bread and cabbage soup ... hard sausages--pickles? Not sure. I like them anyway. Wouldn't they be useful in a cold Russian climate? Preserved foods ... oh, and tea!)
i'm getting hungry
maybe girls get fucked on tables by innkeepers?)
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoPlease please give us more of what happens to Audrey and Lucas. Don't stop.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoWhat a delicious intriguing story! Looking forward to see who will take Audrey's virginity in the end, simply yummy!
Anonymousover 11 years agoThis was absolutely amazingly written, with a strong plot. I love the twists, it keeps things interesting, & the sex scenes are so detailed!
_Eliover 11 years agoEnjoyed it very much and glad to see that you continued the story. Just hope that it is complete.
Anonymousover 11 years agoNormally I can't get into the storylines of erotica, but you have created some very dynamic characters in this story that I can't wait to read more about! Please write more- will Lukas save Audrey from mathew? Excited for the next submission.
Anonymousover 11 years agocall it teasing, edging what ever you wish. but its a very very long time since i read such an addictive story
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoThis is one of the finest examples of erotic writing I have experienced in quite some time. Please continue. It is mesmirizing.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoBy all means, continue the story!! This was so very well written and so very steamy and erotic. It was delicious!
Mistress_Lily514almost 12 years agoAfter reading the Novice, I had to comment. I seldom say anything, but I really liked this story. I finished all four chapters.
kashimayukialmost 12 years agoit's been awhile since I've found a tale that was so engaging. Damn fine work.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoYour writing reminds me of the gaudy furniture and decoration found in old Victorian houses: in short, you over-do it! The premise of your writing is excellent and exciting; but I think you should just write it without trying to be so over-the-top.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoI have so enjoyed reading the stories that you have written. I see that you have already added to this series, yeah! As much as I think you should publish, I am glad that I can read these here, a bit of romance, mystery, intrigue and hot, hot sex.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoI have been reading your stories for quite a while, you are an amazing writer, I just love them, keep on the good work!!!
Anonymousabout 12 years agooh yes this story left me hungry for more! I love that she doesnt have the typical large breasts. and the theme of good vs evil is fabulous!
Please, i want to know what happens next.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoThis story is well-written and exciting. The eroticism is just the perfect amount of lust and want, with a nice battle of good and evil. I am dying to know who gets her and how it happens. Please write more of this story, you are very talented!
TheGuiltyPleasureover 12 years agoHonestly, I feel like it was such an intense story from the start til the end as it easily captured the mood and feelings of realistic character.
Anonymousover 12 years agoI think you have what it takes for writing as a published author, the romance and the sex is quite believable.try writing a book. you can start by writing a thousand word a day, then increase to two thousand,will take you an hour, two at most per day. And in six months time you will be done, I have published books, and I used to write on websites as you do, until one day I decided to make an actual book.It paid really well in the end, so you should consider doing it:-D
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoBeautifully written (and I can say, since I'm an editor). This is, by far, the BEST story I have read on this site - intensely arousing, and very satisfying from a literary angle as well. Please, please continue.
