All Comments on 'The Nude Beach'

Very hot. Little sister seems to be a little whore. Can't wait for the next chapter. A threesome seems in the making.

Hot story, particularly the way you used the sense of relactance mixed with increasing sexual tension. Matt was obviously hoping to fuck her all along, and there's no way her sister won't pick up on the new vibe in the air.

Story content was good if you want to think of this as a fantasy. However as a former Director of Beachfront USA, the nude beach advocacy group in California, I would have to caution you that Zuma Beach's environment is not the way you described in this story. Zuma Beach's nude beach is very well hidden from the rest of the beach because of large area of fallen rock that hides it that you have to climb over to get to. And you did not describe the Gay activity that also takes place there, both male-male and female-female.

The interaction of the placement of his cum was also not very erotic, given that the possibility of Vatican roulette was very possible.

And what a great ride it was, too. I'm not even convinced Matt and Louise visit that beach like he claimed; it was more likely a way of loosening his sister-in-law up so that he could fuck her.