by nudemac
ok, you must write proffesionaly or your just too good to be true. are these things you would like to have happen to you or are you just a freak.either way i'm glad i read these stories.
Please Tell me you wrote the next part in this adventure about sex infront of his mum.
Great story or maybe it wasn't a story but happen in reality?
The build up of the story was good and not rushed of course until the end when It was very fast and thrown together with mom and stuff. I enjoyed to the end, had to take care of self.
WoW ... great story; so plausible and so erotic ... I relished every "voyeur" moment and experienced stimulation caused by the written word! So visual, so exciting; almost too good not to be professional ?!?
A very well written story. It had a great build up and very erotic plateau that I really enjoyed. I truly believe that this just may have been real.