All Comments on 'The Oath Ch. 01'

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Anonymousover 12 years ago

kinda weird...

kinda weird...but you've definitely peaked my interest...please continue...

Eric_Shift over 12 years ago

I see you've got your sci fi helmet on again.

So glad you're back.

I look forward to some of your usual writing magic. Though I hope this story will be longer than the last. As you can never have too much of a good thing.

And in my opinion, your stories are real good.

LordSlamdawgg over 12 years ago

Ecstasy of Sex comingled with a Gruesome Disease

You have a powerful theme here. Thank you for the intriguing read.

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